Monday 13 June 2011

Carmen

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4 comments:

  1. Hello, I LOVE UR CHARATER!
    Anyways.....
    I LIKE THW WAY IT'S CLEAR AND COOL ♣

    To Improve:
    WIRTE MORE.... (XD)

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  2. liked: really good adjectives!
    imrpovements: need more 'weils' :)

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  3. meow, it is very good, you could slow it down a bit though nyaa :3

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  4. she added lots of opinions but could improve on adding linking words

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